as much as i love this anime, the ending definitely did bug me ever so slightly. during the writing of this fic, i figured out why: there wasn't enough closure to it. homura went through hell for who knows how long just for madoka's safety, and after madoka makes her wish and disappears from the earth, homura just continues, demeanor seemingly unchanged. even if it was setting up a sequel, it doesn't feel like she learned anything. i want to change that.
i want to give homura the ending she deserved. i want to give her better character motivation and development. so while i don't think this is my best work writing-wise, it did help me learn something, and i'm grateful for that. :)
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as much as i love this anime, the ending definitely did bug me ever so slightly. during the writing of this fic, i figured out why: there wasn't enough closure to it. homura went through hell for who knows how long just for madoka's safety, and after madoka makes her wish and disappears from the earth, homura just continues, demeanor seemingly unchanged. even if it was setting up a sequel, it doesn't feel like she learned anything. i want to change that.
i want to give homura the ending she deserved. i want to give her better character motivation and development. so while i don't think this is my best work writing-wise, it did help me learn something, and i'm grateful for that. :)